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Glocks and Cadilacs Rum rum dum We was ridin in our Cadi's Rollin on 18's b*h no * we was rollin on 20's! Rum rum dum We was drinkin beers Gettin laid everyday Rum rum dum Ay ay dog lemme get a cheesburger No * get a double cheeseburger! Rum rum dum We was cappin some ice In whities a With our glocks No ***** with our Tek Nines! Rum Rum dum We was smokin weed by day, And smokin wee by night We was getting chased by the po-po urday Urrday urrday! Rum rum dum

Posted by: LeeHunted616 Tue Aug 29, 2006 @ 07:25pm

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Taylor Lee
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Commented on: Wed Aug 30, 2006 @ 12:33am


	I like it, but you edited it from the orginal version. It is still an ingenious peom though.

Commented on: Wed Aug 30, 2006 @ 07:20pm


	I just changed the 2nd the the last line to "Urrday" instead of everyday, and I changed "9's" to Nines.

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Taylor Lee
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Commented on: Thu Aug 31, 2006 @ 12:47am


	You should probably work on the spelling also, and maybe put some space to seperate the verses.

Commented on: Thu Aug 31, 2006 @ 02:47am


	Do you mean "americanize" it? The spelling is that way because the poem is ghetto based, and if I put spaces it'd just be a bunch of verses. You obviously know nothing about poetry..

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Commented on: Sat Sep 02, 2006 @ 10:16pm


	LOL nice little pome thing taylor showed me this once its realy funny. ninja

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